Score: 7

"Does exactly what it says on the tin."

submission: Explosion of Randomness

date: April 24, 2008

The animation quality has been explained and dealt with in the description- so no problems there. The sound quality is pretty good. But most importantly, it was funny enough to make me laugh- the use of 'apologise' was excellent.

You've found a good mix between funny and random. Keep it up!

Score: 8

"Excellent effort."

submission: My Trip to the Zoo

date: April 24, 2008

Witty, hilarious and clean- demonstrating that a flash cartoon doesn't have to be 'edgy' to get laughs. Audio quality is above average and the drawings are charmingly simple.

Great work!

Score: 10

"In a word: Stunning."

submission: IF Round3:Spoiler Vs Jeff

date: April 23, 2008

Without a doubt, this is one of the finest submissions I've seen in months. Great animation, distinctive art style, compelling narrative and a touch of humour- quite simply, it's the complete package.

A preloader text synopsis or recap would help newcomers catch up with the finer points of the storyline.

Keep it up!

Score: 9

"An excellent continuation of an excellent series"

submission: The Fear Hole: Episode 3

date: March 3, 2008

Most importantly, the jokes are witty, fresh and in no way based on memes. The humour in this series is on par with/better than any number of tv shows out there. The animation is smooth, character design is good and the voice acting is above average.

Keep it up!

Score: 8

"A useful piece of kit."

submission: Dice generator for D&D

date: March 1, 2008

I don't D&D anymore, but I would have found this very useful whilst DMing. The 'bonus' addition is extremely useful and would take a lot of hassle out of rolling large numbers of identical dice (suddenly, hordes of enemies become manageable)- and clicking rather than rolling would significantly speed things up.

However, the background would become extremely uncomfortable after a while- I suggest that a slightly more gentle colour scheme could be implemented for anyone that might need to stare at it for a while (e.g. dark backround, light text).

Also, whilst I think this has been commented upon- the lack of a critical modifer actually makes this submission useless for a large number of D20 system rolls- if possible the 'result' section needs to show the whole sum on demand (e.g. D6+1 =4+1 =5).

Good effort, this is useful tool that could be honed into something indispensable. Keep it up.

Score: 2

"Sigh"

submission: Huge Dick Huge Dick Huge

date: March 1, 2008

I'll get the one compliment out of the way: the animation was smooth as silk.

And now...seriously, this joins one of the countless NG submissions that include a cock to be 'edgy' and alternative- because they have nothing else to offer. Think of a joke, story, narrative or slightly original idea before coming back- I doubt people will be as generous with their votes next time.

Score: 2

"Ah...what?"

submission: The Awesome Before Time

date: February 19, 2008

Awful audio quality and animation detract from any real points/jokes that you were trying to make. The land before time deserves a decent parody, but this doesn't cut it.